Free music!

[Zyklus]

Yoda I am not

Speak like this I will

Roses are red;
Violets are blue;
In Soviet Russia;
Poem writes you!

All of a sudden, in one day in computer programming, this melody came to my head... I've played it to death the past three weeks and want to see what you think.  Just so you know, I haven't named it yet.  It's called "proj03" just because it was the 3rd idea I had, and I didn't feel like typing "project". 

http://zyklus.acaro.org/projects/flstudio/proj03.mp3

I'm not sure about the ending part though... It seems that the kick drum is off from the melody.  If I change it, it sounds worse; if I remove it, it sounds like something is missing.

Anywho, this should be in it's own thread, but I feel it really isn't all that important...

[Golden-Death]

Sounds too busy in the beginning for my personal taste. The overlapping notes just don't go.
Needs more Wii.
http://odeo.com/audio/3568283/

[Golden-Death]

There. I wii'fied it.

http://media.putfile.com/asd-28-44

Edit: Also, Gangster'd.
http://media.putfile.com/fsdfsd

H to teh izzle... do do do do.

[Mank]

lol, why is my poem quoted?

[Zyklus]

lol, why is my poem quoted?

because it was on in another thread...

[Mank]

because it was on in another thread...

Yeah.. I know that, but what's it gotta do with free music? xD

[Zyklus]

There. I wii'fied it.

http://media.putfile.com/asd-28-44

Edit: Also, Gangster'd.
http://media.putfile.com/fsdfsd

H to teh izzle... do do do do.

GD, you are a real DJ... I've never heard a song mix so horribly...

... Idk an admin moved my post

[Mank]

lolz I see, that was a fast reply.

[Golden-Death]

I knows. I didn't try, I just pasted one on the other .

Not my fault if your song sucks compared to Shizzleness.
 

[Mank]

I knows. I didn't try, I just pasted one on the other .

Not my fault if your song sucks compared to Shizzleness.
 

I was talking about Zyklus' fast reply to my post, not yours =D

FO SHIZZLE MA NIZZLE.  btw.

[Golden-Death]

I wasnt talkin to joo, foo.

[Mank]

I wasnt talkin to joo, foo.

NO U

Oh youu

Well, anyway, this thread is confusing.